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Shadows on the Wall

Shadows on the Wall

We only know third-hand what has happened
second-hand as the first hand controls all
things that dance and play as shadows on the wall,
in the cave where we grow and live within.
Who knows who is the master of shadows?
A man who holds the strings of puppets?
In tears and sighs, the woman who charms him?
With toys and dolls, the child who lies and cries?
Star my cat, who ambles his way along?
One may know, but two may not. It is said
and who can tell but those beyond shadows
from the origin and descent of things.
Then my cat will say, with a yawn and a yat,
“Go to sleep, and forget all about that!”

Finally, I get to write on one of the DVerse poets prompts. This was based on the suggestion of writing a poem based Plato's Allegory of the Cave. If you've not read that- here you go.

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Comments

deep thoughts

well first its really cool that your cat can talk...def see the hints of the cave through out...you really dance the words well to get us thinking...some questions will be debated until the end of time...and you know finding enough to let them go and live i think is a great thing...think i will listen to your cat now and go to bed...smiles.

brian miller
http://www.waystationone.com

What a fun time!

I enjoyed this one. I always wondered who was pulling the strings of the marionettes in Plato's cave. Simone Weil understands the myth as a political allegory, and suggests that the only way to seek reality is take responsibility for reality and confront the and overthrow the masters who keep the people enslaved by propagating illusions.

Re: What a fun time!

And if you can't believe Simone Weil ... well, who can you believe? A Canadian poet, Lorri Neilsen Glenn, released "Lost Gospels" in 2010; her book that's central theme is the poetic sequence "Songs for Simone" - a troubled conversation between the poet and Weil (your mention of the mystical philosopher reminded me and I thought you might be interested ... it's an excellent book)- your poem is also excellent and great fun!

(Anonymous)

i much..

..like your take on this...sitting in the cave...trying to explain, find the answers and then that very practical thinking cat...who i think lives in all of us...who just wants to live life as it comes and not really go into the depths..because...yeah...can get really uncomfortable..liked it

claudia of http://jaywalkingthemoon.wordpress.com

(Anonymous)

Like the puppet master being pretty much at the whim of diverse things, too, and frankly, I don't think cats could do a worse job than those currently holding the strings. My favorite line is "One may know, but two may not." Seems to sum up the random iffiness of anything you examine closely.


~hedgewitch @ verse escape